Above is a screen shot from feedback that I have received in relation to my blog. I have tried to keeping my blog up to date as this was criticism that i previously received, I have tried doing this with weekly journal posts. The feedback that I have received is a fair account, at the top is a mark scheme of how our blogs are marked M = Minimal, B= Basic, P= Proficient and E= Excellent. My blog currently is a mixture of Basic and Proficient, I want to try and improve this and get the Basic to Proficient or Excellent to do do this I will have to add more detail to my posts and gradually improve my posts. To achieve a good grade I will need to do more work on my blogs and make my posts more detailed.
